by manchesterkate123
Good story... but...
Do no authors bother with proper sexual hygeine in their stories? He fucked her ass, they dozed off, then he fucked her pussy again. With no cock cleaning in the middle. That puts incredibly dangerous anal bacteria into her pussy, and will likely cause a hornendous infection. Serious trouble for her pussy. Please at least add that she washed him off with a cloth.
Also... "He was circumcised, which meant the head was sensitive to even the slightest touch." is incorrect. Circumcision actually makes the head of the penis LESS sensititve to touch, because of the lack of protective foreskin. Anatomy101.