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- COMMENTS
Anonymous8 months agoA disappointing, awkward conclusion. The author's skill level was insufficient to convincingly portray his vision of the dramatically altered roles adopted by the wife, the husband and the new lover. Less, if done well, would truly have been more.
Anonymous11 months agoOK, but how did Steven get Eva to play the submissive slave? Revenge on Angel? Really, kinda hardly revenge for Eva to degrade herself. Of course she’s a submissive, but that hardly fits with her persona in the earlier chapters. And exactly how is Angel going to dom Eva without a cock? I guess now Angel is free to peruse Des and use him to dom Eva, while having Des for herself. And where is the part were Steven kicks Des in the balls?
kirei8over 1 year agoA total slut to the end. Hope he reeked more havoc other than humiliation...for a long long time.
