All Comments on 'Dangerous Sex'

could have been better if you had finished and told us what happened when the kids found out the parents were watching do they continue or do the parents send him to milatary school do they go to college together let us know soon

But I had orgasm reading this story. Very good work. Carry on making stories this descriptive. I almost fell off the seat.

finish it with something like what happens if they get caught the reaction of their parents faces when he knocks her up something like that.

at least make it believable

Uh hu... Right...

Maybe start with kiddy stories before you attepmt the big stuff.

you write like A 2 year old

ok i will agree it is not a very good sotry but for me its not the facts but more about the images i see when i read so it still did the job it was ment to do tho it did take me a very long time

either finish this story or delete it never ever leave the readers hanging get a good editor and do a proper rewrite then finish it now. SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR AND FINISH WHAT YOU START OR DON'T START AT ALL.

STORY IS WICKED CONTINUE IT CHAPTER 2 MY BROTHER THE GREAT SLAYER

what the others said plus only superman can look through door knobs due to his x-ray vision this idiot was looking through a KEY HOLE. typical wannabe writer for this site wastes his time, our time and the sites space WE NEED A DELETE BUTTON ONCE AGAIN.

This was not a well written story. It falls below most standards in editing, storytelling, grammar, and diction. It sounds more like an adolescent dream than erotic tale. You should consider taking this story down, rewriting it to make it flow better, and then run it by an editor. There are many here that will help you to make this story a good one.

Hilarious misuse of language and misunderstanding of anatomy! I suspected this was meant to be a parody of a writer that uses a thesaurus badly - surely no one would actually describe the 'cranium' of a penis? LOL!

Holy fucking Shit! It was so hot, that I masturbated to that! It was a good story. I loved it. Haha

Great content,but you have to get some help with the grammar. It can be very distracting, your content is too good to not improve the grammar. Keep up the good work

The classic " I have no clue about a woman's anatomy" story. Started out as a pretty hot quick fuck story until it came screeching to a halt with the "It took a little more the 4" of his cock to deflower me" statement. Hah, more like 4 mm. research the information before making an outrageous claim like that. Did you even pay attention in the anatomy and physiology part of biology class in high school?

Grammer...nothing more irritating than comstantly seeing miss spellings..get that under control and you will have a good story.

(Rolling eyes) ...a girl has one clit. ONE! Mind you, I bet a lot of them wish they had two, lol.

I hope you aren't predictable and write another part where dad fucks the daughter and mom fucks the son. Sophia belongs to Nick and I think that's the way she wants it but no writers like to pass women around like a joint at a snoop dog concert

Your descriptions and metiphors need a lot of work. A man is well-hung. His cock isn’t.