All Comments on 'Dani and the Christmas Dildo'

by Voboy

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PervusWilsonPervusWilsonover 6 years ago
3.stars

Okay, I only read about half a page and then the last page. Something about not drinking cum from someone's ass unless she wants too. And it was enough.

Anyway, I liked the ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Well, that was... gross. I usually enjoy your non-sanitized view of sex and I understand what you were going for, kinky prostitute looking for a normal relationship, but this was a step too far in the other direction. I think at the very least this should have been submitted in Fetish.

Chancem77Chancem77over 6 years ago
I feel...

really dirty after reading this. It's very well written, but I kind of lost interest after the one customer smeared her turds over his face and hair. I'm going to go scrub my mind out with soap now...

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Dani

I like Dani too and would like to see her story continue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Very well written

I agree that my taste doesn't go near as far as this story did in the really nasty sex department. But I gave you a 5 because this stuff must happen, so I found it interesting, even if gross as another reviewer stated. And, it was a damn good story written very well. So I am not penalizing you for a difference in taste, but rewarding you for craftsmanship.

I will tell you that I wondered numerous times how the hell you know about some of the stuff described in such vivid detail!

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All but a few of my stories are linked together; they all take place in a common "universe" that, frankly, I'd love to live in. So any character in any story is, eventually, fair game to have themselves a wild time with any other character. I've gotten a list together that co...