by dhope75
I look forward to your next installment. My only suggestion is that you give slave boy more, fear, intimidation, & indecision, before he agrees to some serious pain.
I think that any sane person would. Even a Masacist like myself would have to have second thoughts.
It's your story of course, but i just think your future slave boy should be more coherest, at least at first into giving up his will to a stranger. apologize for the misspelling.
Also, I would like to know more of what your Dom. guy is thinking if you could. So i can understand his motivation.
Please keep 'em coming.
jer
I accidentally pressed the one star instead of the four stars so if your rating goes down I am terribly sorry.