All Comments on 'Daniel Meets his Master'

by dhope75

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RikonaRikonaover 12 years ago

uh oh... cant wait for the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Attempt at reality

I look forward to your next installment. My only suggestion is that you give slave boy more, fear, intimidation, & indecision, before he agrees to some serious pain.

I think that any sane person would. Even a Masacist like myself would have to have second thoughts.

It's your story of course, but i just think your future slave boy should be more coherest, at least at first into giving up his will to a stranger. apologize for the misspelling.

Also, I would like to know more of what your Dom. guy is thinking if you could. So i can understand his motivation.

Please keep 'em coming.

jer

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

average

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

I accidentally pressed the one star instead of the four stars so if your rating goes down I am terribly sorry.

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