All Comments on 'Danielle'

I enjoyed the story, but it came to an end way too fast. You had a chance to really develop it into a longer series. Keep writing though.

Wonderful story please keep writing as the other comment stated it could be much more.

Very smooth, enjoyable reading throughout and as was previously suggested, you seem to have all of the tools to put together some excellent multiple chapter stories. Your characters have enough depth and particular interest without dragging us into boredom as you weave events together.

BRAVO!! Keep 'em coming!!

To any who wonder, I met such a couple once, exactly 30 years difference in age. So it can happen. Well written and romantic. I was wondering how a waiter could afford all that but that was answered at the end LOL. Keep writing.

Great story, but none of the words you hyphenated are hyphenated.

Loved the story!

Thanks to all who commented. As far as the hyphens go, occasionally that is the curse of converting odt to txt. I truly appreciate the feedback and the constructive criticism, and will be posting more soon. Many thanx again

Ren

........I just think the ending is rushed and doesn't fit with the leisurely pace of the build-up.

"black linen suit, aubergine shirt, and my favorite tie, a silk Brioni medallion in red and blue. I dressed carefully and slipped into my black loafers...no socks"

Ugh what a dreadful combination!

BUT she was way too young for him. It's a Mature category story not a Romance and I don't really like older male younger female stories. REALITY says when she hits her prime sexually he might need even more than a little blue pill...

Please please please, can we have another story? You're brilliant!

I've lost my password so haven't been able to post in forever.

Working on some stuff.

Nice thing about writing romantic fiction;

A given character lives, breathes, and exhibits (or hides) his/her/its 'aenima' in the way the author's imagination intended. As I am, therefore, Mr. Fox's valet & couturier, 'twas I who selected his wardrobe for the evening. Sorry to disappoint.

I'll tell Mr. Armani.