All Comments on 'Danielle's Need'

by DOMann1959

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
I didn’t like this story

The way you described the characters seem like pretty bad people. Danielle cheats on her husband, uses the excuse he’s probably cheating on her, berates the man she cheated with, and then fucks her son. Also she informs her son not to tell her husband she cheated. The son really doesn’t care much about his father and is almost as morally fucked as his mother. In the end this story was not well thought out and have Flimsy excuses and reasoning to why the events in the story are happening

Jayincest15Jayincest15over 6 years ago
Good story

I liked it

rightbankrightbankover 6 years ago
I was with you

Till the ending

There's no way the husband should be rewarded for his behaviour.

WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 6 years ago
Ah yes, he’s so popular he fucked the pastors daughter AND her mother

And then his mother. Hes damn near porn star built, has a fuck ton of stamina and yet still lives at home like a little baby.

No, no, tell us more. I want to know how they plan to live since hes an unemployed bitch and shes a stay at home...mom? Whatever the fuck she is..

ManoBlueManoBlueover 6 years ago
Wuss

Just OK with your Mom admitting she's about go cheat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Good!

Pretty good story. A second part would be nice. Need a better ending. Remember people this is just fantasy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago

Story is not completed. Adam told about his previous experience. Hence, why not write prequel? What about dad? Possibly relations of son with his lover? Is it only ONE mom-son story? Sounds like that this story without beginning and end

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
A crime

It would be a crime to leave this story as is... It needs to be continued, answering most questions to some degree. Maybe when Danielle learns of the mistress' pregnancy, she will decide to have another baby! So many avenues that can be explored. Please continue...

kennyboy82kennyboy82over 6 years ago

I thought this was an awesome story, very hot'n'nasty! It definitely deserves a second chapter, perhaps Adam could impregnate his Mom!

lonelypappalonelypappaover 6 years ago
FUCKING AWESOME

FUCK I WOULD GIVE THIS STORY A MILLION I WANT MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE WHAT AGREAT SON WRITE MORE PLEASE

Nighthawk53Nighthawk53about 5 years ago
Interestingly done

Surprised you had the dad find out as quickly as you did. Maybe you can turn this around and have them all join in a four-way. Just a thought.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Finally a good ending one so many people leave the stories open.this was fun to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Poor thing

A whole month without sex. It really makes mom extremely trust worthy and faithful. Atleast make it 6 months or just make her a straight up whore. Well seems you made her just an Instawhore

DocWordsDocWordsover 2 years ago

Thanks for posting this. Well written.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Wish dad would of caught them fucking,and told to watch his son pound his big cock into his wife

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

ok.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very nice story loved how her son satisfied her needs you should have continued until his mother found out her husband got another woman pregnant and then she did the same with her son and then kicked her husband out gave it 5 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

mrdata9770mrdata97704 months ago

(12/27/2023) Well okay, this was interesting. But too short. This is screaming for a second chapter. But it's been six years.

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