All Comments on 'Daniel's Ch. 02'

by lillibeth3

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xxClarexxxxClarexxover 9 years ago
Hooray

I'm so glad to see you continue with this but that's so mean to post such a short chapter. Hit me with more pleeeease. I'm intrigued! And I hope he's going to be a bit nicer to her now? The suspense is killing me!

lillibeth3lillibeth3over 9 years agoAuthor
Working on it

Hopefully I will be able to write some this weekend, exams are here for college sadly, so that will not be fun :( Ugh nursing is not easy! Sorry for the delay, but I promise I'll have more up soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Good, but short

Please, could you make the next one longer?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
MOAR?

Hey Lilibeth! Do you think you'll update anytime soon? This is one story out of only a few that I'm hanging for. Please update soon and Merry Christmas to you. Xoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Moaaaar please

I feel for you lillabeth, I graduated nursing school a year ago and it's brutal! But I love this story and would love if you could write more!

I'm eagerly awaiting :) and best of luck with the school stuff!

xxClarexxxxClarexxover 9 years ago
OMG pleaaaaase!

Please post an update!!! You said more was coming! I'm sorry I know you're busy I just can't take it. I just reread this and this line

"Your naked body should only be seen by those who love your naked soul." Is so poignant. I love it

Thanks for sharing with us and Merry Christmas to you :))))

chocolatesistachocolatesistaabout 9 years ago
I'm a fan

I hope you write more...

lillibeth3lillibeth3about 9 years agoAuthor
New Chapter Submitted!

Okay, well the title says in all pretty much. I know that I haven't updated recently, and I am very sorry about that! But this story is not abandoned, and I am going to try to work on updating every week or so from now on. Thanks for all your support.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
As he's bent over her

Why not drive her knuckles into his throat, crushing it and killing him? Takes very little effort and very little force.

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