All Comments on 'Daniel's Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Yum...

...what a great chapter and well worth the wait! I love

This story so much! Please more and I love to hear you plan to submit chapters more quickly these waits are killing me! Much love

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 9 years ago

I'm curious as to what Daniel is thinking. Why did he kidnap her if they were promised to each other by their families? She said she was disowned by her family but did that mean her ties were cut from Daniel too?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

Your story is looking great! I just wish thtt you made the chapters longer so it wouldn't seem so fragmented

:) x

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Great story.

I am really enjoying this story. Can hardly wait for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Help Lilibeth!

Please, I am desperate for more of this awesome story! Where have you gone? Each chapter is better and better and I am so intrigued and dying to find out what is going to happen next. I would love to read some hot nonconsensual sex between them Daniel is so hot and scary! Please tell us how you are going! Xoxoxo

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Lillibeth -

Hi Lillibeth, I was wondering if you could give us an update on when we might see a new chapter from you? This is such a great story and it's one of the ones that I follow and eagerly look for new chapters from you so much. I know you are busy at nursing school and hope it's going well for you, but would love if you could stop by to let us know when you think you will have a new chapter for us? It seems things are really heating up here and Daniel is so hot and possessive of our unnamed heroine (let's call her Violet! She seems like a violet to me) that I find myself fantasizing on what he will do to her next XD

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Please please please!

Please tell us you haven't abandoned this incredible story! I think I'll die if I don't get to read any more! I've been checking everyday for updates and you've been silent so long. Please please check in and let us know you're still writing this wonderful story! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
It's such a train wreck

There's nothing to continue and no where to go.

desjdesjabout 6 years ago

Sad another story never finished it seemed good

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
He deserves to rot in hell

So all he is doing is dragging it out. He is torturing her how the hell does that make him her mate? Makes no sense

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