All Comments on 'Dan's Lil Sis Ch. 01'

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AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
Read your bio and think you achieved your stated goal--

This story reflects your aims as well as achieving a good standard. I thought your writing was good and the story was very good. Please keep on submitting and thank you for the entertainment.

RossDanielsRossDanielsalmost 14 years ago
Nicely done.

A very sexy start to what promises to be an excellent story.

werewolvesftwwerewolvesftwalmost 14 years ago
GREAT START

Im totally loving where your going with this story, very intense and exciting! Keep up the good work, looking forward to reading more (: thumbsup

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