by mofguy
First: I agree, you need an editor.
Second: Don't stop now. Keep this story going.
Great story line, I'm a big breasted gals who has nipples that live to be sucked.
Lived nursing my babies.and loved hubby sucking them dry .I believe they did grow..best way to get me in the mood is pull and rub my nipples
.im so loving this character's learning about life