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Click hereCamera flashes exploded in a confusing flurry. Everyone wanted to capture it. Mandy grinned happily between her 'O' faces. The intensity made her grab the door handle tightly above her head. The other found the back of Jenny's head. With a firm grasp of a clump of hair, she pushed her face more forcefully against her soaking snatch. Jenny shoved her thick tongue as far as she could inside Mandy, flicking and massaging wildly. This sent Mandy crazy. She bucked her hips like an untamed bull. Her pussy clenched and squeezed around Jenny's tongue and mouth. She seized into frenzy, gushing juices into her face.
Mandy let out an uncontrolled yell of pleasure. It went on and on, only broken to catch her stunted breath. She was loud, but still had to compete with the cheers and yells of the watching crowd. Camera flashes were generous. Even John had videoed this affair from the start. Gradually Mandy slowed down with her writhing, and released Jenny's head from her clutch. John's mom pulled her face away, Mandy's pleasurable juices dripping down her chin onto her chest. She sat back, smiling around at all the people watching. After catching her breath Mandy sat up and kissed her boyfriend through the window. The crowd slowly quieted down as the women regained composure.
Mandy, seemingly knowing what she was doing, sat next to Jenny, throwing her legs over her lap. She put an arm around her lover's shoulders and smiled. She smiled not at Jenny, but around the people watching. There must have been twenty or so now, surrounding the car. She posed and flirted with the cameras, pushing her bust out hard against the bra, encouraging Jenny to do similar. Jenny chuckled, and played along, putting a finger in her mouth pretending to suck, then pinching her nipples and massaging Mandy's thigh. The two of them laughed together in their own private joke.
Mandy found her panties and pulled them on, and then her shorts and t-shirt. Jenny followed suit and replaced her bikini, but had nothing else to cover with. Mandy kissed her affectionately on the cheek, and then exited the car as swiftly as she had entered. People around the car complimented her performance as she got out. She blushed, accepting the admiration genuinely. Before leaving the scene, Mandy leaned through the window and passed John, not Mandy, a business card. It had her name and number on it, along with some obscure company name.
"If you want to increase her profile some more, or yours for that matter, give me a call." She smiled at John and then Jenny before walking away hand in hand with her boyfriend. Mother and son watched as they disappeared. The crowds' attention soon returned to them left sat in the car. Jenny looked around, a little more aware of their situation now. One man approached the window, belt unbuckled.
"Wanna suck my dick next?" he asked crudely. Jenny threw her gaze over to John, coming back to a sense of reality. John, rather than reply, just closed both electric windows from the front dash, to the sound of groans from the remaining men and women outside. He started the engine and backed out of the space nearly running over the feet of the voyeurs, would refused to give up from demanding more. Jenny waved her fingers playfully at them as they drove away.
They started on their way home, Jenny moaning softly in satisfaction, recounting the events of the day. She rested back flat against the seat.
"Nice to see you really don't back out of dares, mom, and you made a new friend" John joked. Jenny smiled to herself.
"Don't lose that card." She told her son.
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- COMMENTS
live4thebj3 months agoStarted off good then started to lose interest. The whole going to the mall then having people ogle her in the car was a bit over the top for me. I bailed. *
Anonymous10 months agoEveryone who takes the time and cares enough to comment on erotic literature, myself included, has at least a small amount of perv in them. So it's disheartening to see how many stories are flamed with kink shaming comments. It's ok if the story didn't go exactly how you hoped. It's a story. The author may have made choices you dislike, but that doesn't make them a monster, disgusting, Hitler or any other discussion ending descriptor someone may choose in a moment of, most likely ruined orgasm driven, heightened passion. Wait for that post nut clarity before posting a comment. Try and take a moment to consider the amount of effort required to wholly tear from the ether a spanking new story, particularly one that inspires self pleasure. Not to mention the vulnerability of posting creative writing somewhere that allows anonymous comments.
If an author let you down with a story, give it a rating. You needn't create an account for that. Although, we are naturally motivated to shit on things more than we are to praise them. And the internet is eternal. So in 5 minutes you no longer care but the author wears your vitriol like a scarlet letter forever. We all yearn for acceptance and praise, but moreso to be heard and understood. So shut up and listen. And take ownership of your spank bank. If you don't like the direction a story is heading, read another one.
To paraphrase Kurt Vonnegut, writing is easy; you just sit at your laptop and bleed. So if you are passionate enough that you want to comment about how someone ruined your life by writing a story "wrong".... rewrite the story. Or better yet, grab your lady balls, bone up on the journey of Joey Cam's hero, and create some new shit where you make all of the choices for the characters. Write what you know and what your heart desires. And kill your darlings. But we would all be better humans and the world would suck a little less, if we held our tongues when we want to shit all over someone's artistic expression or sexual fantasies. They're fantasies.
Plus, this is Literotica... why so serious? I would assume you don't flame Stan Lee's foundation, wife or gravesite because he created characters that can do supernatural shit. After all, that shit ain't believable either. As with comics, television and movies, erotic literature should be read with a suspension of disbelief..... and for best results, a hard cock. To the uninitiated this means check your "Nuh uhhhh that can't happen I don't believe that she would say that..." kinda comments at the door. You may be right, but that doesn't make you smart. In fact, we all probably know what you're saying, but you are too dense to understand that and genuinely think you're being helpful. You're ruining the movie, dum dum. Take a moment and enjoy the storyline for what it is. FICTION.
PostScript: to all lit fans under the age of 25, you compulsive masturbaters may disregard this comment and please forgive me for not placing this in a tl;dr up top. The fact is your brains haven't fully cognitively matured and we cannot in good conscience expect you to not think that: your opinion is worth expressing, you're smarter than everyone else and always right, the world revolves around you, the author's of everything you consume were writing specifically for you and desperately wait with bated breath for your comments on how they've fucked up their life's work. We don't know how we survived without you, but we have a trophy to commemorate your contributions. Just follow the good doctor through that door and wash your stank ass in the zyklon showers first.
Addendum: in the paraphrase of Vonnegut the author of this loquacious filth intentionally used the semicolon, fully aware that vonneguts 20th century views on the often overused and mostly misused punctuation may be seen as insensitive when viewed through 21st century eyes. To be sure, no transvestite hermaphrodites were harmed in the making of this comment. But we did interrobang the fuck out of some colons, college boy.
Seadog971over 1 year agoFirst part 2d was very good. I was really impressed wih the concept and how the storyline was developed and wanted more? When the 2nd part with Jenny "sneaking" around the corner I felt a really good continuation was at hand. But when the park scene developed I was extremely disappointed with John's treatment of his mother. I would like a continuation but with Mom and Jon and maybe Mandy but only with Mom's encouragement. I think the writing is very good but maybe some minor editting assistance.
Anonymousover 2 years agoJohn is a complete shit, what kind of asshole would treat his mother like that.
