All Comments on 'Daring Dice'

Intrigued by the first two paragraphs. Want to read Chapter two now.

Well done so far, but feels a bit incomplete and ends just as things start to get interesting. Look forward to more, and curious where this is all headed!

A most enjoyable, if short, introduction to what could be a fascinating story - more please! 4*s and thank you.

traci

A very neat story. I like the setting and where it could go. I like that you took your time with it and played on her shyness.

The storyline was weak. What's the dare part?!? What's the fetish part?!? Just seems like sluts (because there is no other incentive for playing) playing a strip game just to get naked and screw the boss. Big whoop-ti-do! Gee, how original.

Light. Bethany, the shy new girl, is a well-drawn character, but the "game" part is just not menacing enough. Stacia, who should be the joker in the pack, doesn't come off villainous enough. Lord Matthias' "okay" is so out of place that it jarred me out of my suspension of disbelief. So the whole story hangs fire, and anticipation gives way to disappointment. Poor use of a good theme. But don't give up. You can make it if you try.