All Comments on 'Dark and Stormy Night'

Thanks, I enjoyed your story.

Very well thought out, with a subtly twisted thread. It does have a small town vibe to it.

This is a believable story about a mom and daughter, which makes it great. Thanks for selling it so well.

Twelve kids! (Shuddering:). No. Thank. You. !! I like the *idea* of having a few daughters, as well as making love with a pregnant wife, but the reality of diapers, screaming and crying, lost sleep, lost playtime, my toy money spent on kids clothes, less sex....nah, Ill pass! We just borrow the nieces and give them back and were good! Hehe

As a boy growing up in Kansas i can remember 8 times getting into tub during a severe storm. Completely believable that such a situation could arise in those circumstances. I enjoyed this post greatly