All Comments on 'Dark Angel'

I think Non consent would be the right genre, however a little comfort was the punishment of these people - would have liked to read about this last lot being punished and more in the fashion of "an eye for an eye"...

Wouldn't mind reading more if this turned into a series.

Cheap, pulp fiction, fast-moving, er - actually not bad at all! Would lend itself to highly evocative cover art.

the poor grammar and spelling...and dialog - it just wasn't that good of a story. Sorry to sound mean...but perhaps an English course would help? Perhaps English isn't your first language? I guess based on your frequent use of the wrong word: using "one" instead of "won" and "BLAME" instead of "BLAM" and so many others that were so distracting.

You really need an editor.