by DarkTerra
Looking forward to seeing your take on the "little guy takes on the power structure" theme. Enjoying the ride so far!
Glad to see you posting on this excellent story again, please don't end it now, you know it is not really finished yet and I am so enjoying the ride! I went back and reread the whole tale again for a refresher when I saw chapter 6 this morning. 5 stars and thank you.
BRING IT ON!! The darker, murkier and convoluted the the plot becomes, the more I am drawn onto it. I realize that real life intervenes and will wait your decision.
Please keep writing, more story & more steamy sex,can't wait for the next one!!!!
You have so many avenues to explore with the people who were after Ren and things of that nature that I can't even conceive of that being a satisfying ending. Keep going deeper into the story please.
though somewhat disappointed in the time it took for this last chapter...the murkier path would be BEST !!!! As of right now there are too many threads left for simply a quick fix.
thank you
Fantastic story needs to continue...do full dark, get revenge on the powers that threaten their " happily ever after". Let Ren and his little one loose to destroy the threat to their love...