All Comments on 'Dark Assassin Ch. 01'

nice story as it goes...I would like to read more of it

It is a lovely opening chapter. There seemed to be a couple of spelling errors to me, however they didn't reduce my enjoyment of the story.

If you are looking for a editor I will be more than willing to help. The final decision is completely up to you

LooKing forward to more of this story.

Regards

- Jim1885

Your story is lovely, please submit the next part soon!

Thank you for the kind comments and ratings.

Chapter 2 is already submitted and I am wrapping up Chapter 3 right now.

Happy reading :)