All Comments on 'Dark Blue'

Once again a great story told with extreme humor. You do this as well as anyone and better than most. It brightens my day when I see a new one from LYG. Thanks!

This was a fun story. Keep up the good work.

Regards, Jack

you sneak in the humor! This story was a real treat and your humor adds to your considerable writing skills. Thanks!

<p>... At this line:</p>

<p><i>Errol... I mean Bill, seemed to have the upper hand until he was stabbed in the nuts by her rubber saber. </i></p>

<p>That paragraph had me laughing till I saw stars.</p>

<p>Nice read</p>

-Risq

Was this intentional or did you mean "waist"? Good fun if intentional

this genre down pat. Too bad you can't

write 24/7!

Put a big smile on my face! Good work LYG.

to see your name on a work to be read. It can make an evening as this one did.<P>

Your wings have spread, into this and that without any loss of care and depth and the humor which somehow is expected to carry it but is really just a pleasant plus.<P>

In all that, there will be bad people but they are on the other side as our leads are complex, humorous but wanted as neighbors or friends because they can be trusted.<P>

So thanks Author - keep on keepin on as you are appreciated.<P>

With Very High Regard

Great story! I wonder if the hero's last name, Romanski, was accidental or another piece of your delightful humor.

Boyd

from you know who in VA

Superbly told, with excellent pacing, richly drawn characters who face life with grit and integrity, and seasoned lightly with humor that makes the story dance right along. Thank you.

THIS STORY WAS AWESOME I LOVED IT!!! YOU HAD ME DYING OF LAUGHTER!!!! LOVED IT!!!!!!!

And very humorous.. The dialogue can be really funny.. It's a very serious story of romance with a hard way, for him, to know love.. I think Nancy is quite happy, now.. I got the impression that he was checked out at the hospital quite often.. Due to knife wounds and bullet wounds, no doubt..{;=))

A combination of good prose, strong wit and excellent characterization will always make a fun read. Thank you, author, can we have another? I just loved these characters -you made me care about them!

Nice heart-warming story. Decent jokes makes me laughing. In Germany we would say:

<p>"Ich habe mir ein Loch in den Bauch gefreut."</p> I don't know a similar phrase in english. I always enjoy your writing.

<p>Thank you</p>

<b>Nucleus</b>

i loved the humor in this.reminded of so many of my cop buddies. hard assed big hearted funny bastards. just the way they should be.

Great humor, characters, and I could picture LA that I left. Thanks for the story and your time writing it.

Reminds me of an old Guy Clark song LA Freeway, which has the line "if I can just get off of this LA Freeway without getting killed or caught". Good story, great characters, throw in some realistic humor, sex, love, friendship,...etc and you have a great read.

Great story--thank you. I'm going to recheck your submissions to be sure I didn't miss more. Tom

You've got a nice story here. Romantic, cute, and more realistic than your average romance story. It made for an interesting and fun read. On the other hand, either you need to smack your editor, or you need to start using one. I winced a few times when reading. Particularly on the first page where you used "scull" instead of "skull". Any spellcheck program would have caught that one. The ending seemed a bit rushed, but all in all it was good story.

Glocks do not have a safty that can be released.

I believe theres supposed to be an E in there somewhere..

Yeah, it is. And you should probably use "waist" instead of "waste" as in "above the waist." Unless of course you're a total slob in which case "above the waste" might be accurate and correct.

I know most of your characters - I have been a cop, worked in the ER and of course seen the street heh - they are all out there just like you paint them -

Well done and he is one lucky sum biotch

You have to have either been part of or close to someone in the thin blue line. Great story, and I know those people, I've met em!

You HAD to have been a cop! Too many things are too true.

damn good read --as usual

Butch

I think I handled that same homeless guy that shit in the sidewalk. I didn't put him in my sector car either. Thanks for a great story.

well that was one fine story. thank you.

The story had good numbers after it on the list. Worth every bit of it. Good reading. Good author. Good story line. Cheers!

Wow, what a story. I haven't laughed as hard as I did in a very long time.

Thank you very much for the uplifting story.

Leave the cheating wife stories alone. Stick to stories like this, where two people REALLY do love each other and not just say they do. Because, actions really do speak louder than words.

Do you take this woman to be your wife? ... Affirmative.

lol

Great story :)

The typical story on here is ALL about SEX.... and more times than not, it's SEX with someone who ain't your wife or husband or honey......

After awhile, you think you've figured out that whoever cums here, cums because he or she ain't got no place else to cum, at least during the time that they cum here.....

Then all of a sudden, I'm reading these weird stories where nobody is having sex......

No sex with your neighbor, no sex with your Mother or Father, no sex with your sibling.....

IT AIN'T RIGHT..... IS THE WORLD FIXIN' TO END?

IT AIN'T RIGHT, I TELL YA........

A well written and humorous tail. I love your wit and plan to read more of it right now! Please keep it coming.

PS the other annon's need to realize that if they don't like a story they should read someone else's work. Your stuff is awesome and they should stop bitching because not everyone who comes here is looking just for meet wank fodder.

Great humor.

Cute! Good humorous tale. Good writing as well. Cheers!

to be fiction

thanks

Loved the breakfasts. Gotta love L.A.

DO YOUR RESEARCH!! GLOCK PISTOLS DON'T HAVE AN EXTERNAL SAFETY.

I ENJOYED IT, I loved the bit about finance and Nancy now that was funny! Who cares about the bittie bits It's fiction for your information. I loved the story. Love you all! Bye. Greg.

Nice story, well done characters, smart humour, well written, and the sex didn't go on, and on, and on.

Will read some more of yours.

A very rough story well written and told. Even though LA is better now with the smog it's still a fucking dump and will get worse with total democrat rule, soon to be bankrupt from complete abject stupidity. Look at Detroit and see your future LA.

I still love it, it has pretty much everything you would expect from a romance. Quick sex scenes, a developing hero, and realizing the love at the end. Well written.

Great story. I'll be back to read it again from time to time. 5 stars and add to my Favorite stories list.

But I really like it. 5*'s ???, yep.

If you are going to be critical of textual errors

"I believe theres supposed to be an E in there somewhere.."

You should proof your own work before posting.

I believe an apostrophe is missing.

lol

I enjoyed reading it, again. My second time through. And I still think it's a 5 Star story.

But just for the record, and one more time, A Glock does - NOT- have a safety. Thank you for your story.

Another fine little romance, thanks!

> But just for the record, and one more time, A Glock does - NOT- have a safety.

What about the trigger safety?

http://us.glock.com/technology/safe-action

Tired of KIA assholes who have to make themselves feel impressive with inane tidbits of information, usually manipulated to create an air of superiority. Glock just created a different version of the SAFETY, but it's still a SAFETY, arse hole. Great story by the way!!

5*

I laughed so hard I spilled my coffee. Luckily I missed the keyboard but not by much.

Great story and even better humor.

needs to find a new site for stories because you are completely missing the point with this one.

An excellent story. Well done!

The narration is fluid. The story can be improved.

Really nice first person account, enjoyed it. This reminds me of some of the Phillip Morrow stories in the way it was told.

The antics were hillarious, and overall the story was greaty enjoyable.

But Glocks don't have safeties

Really enjoyed

jtwheels

Decent story,would have liked a bit more.

Laughed my ass off when partner was looking for the legs.

Age to understand the Jack Webb/Dragnet, In Like Flynn, the hint about the white Bronco slo-mo freeway chase and the bay area earthquake while I was watching Game 3 of the Worldserious but even if you aren't and can't it won't matter a tinker's damn to enjoying this story. Note to Jamie; maybe they don't in California but there's plenty of men out there would Do enjoy eating pussy. Had a girlfriend once would who tell me "Okay, you can do that but you can't kiss me afterwards." Ya, Sure, Ya, Betcha, like that wasn't going to happen. Can't figure out how I never commented on this story when I read it before. When they get near Seattle they should take the Underground Tour. LYG had a way with humor mixed with Romance. Signed: BTW

A very well done little story. Very enjoyable read. Bravos.

Well done, save one small detail. Glocks do not have thumb safeties. Only the trigger inset and the internals.

Buying all the wedding stuff in three hours?

Only in fairytales. But it was a good one. :)

Maybe Literotica.com should add the categorie 'fairytale'.

This was a big step for Nancy and I ??? WTF with the bad grammar? second such in this story.

I should have went???...plus some spelling, typos.

not bad, overall.

Who the fuck roasts a crab?

No1_OfConsequence There is a Glock 17 Gen 3 and a Glock 19 Gen 3 with factory Glock thumb safety.

Good cop noir story lost plot on way out of LA. Marriage is not the solution to this pairing, it should have been a quick halt on a way to a better life that integrates their skills and interests and gives them a goal to strive for. I can only grasp for what that should be: - political power as a pure independent? Starting their own hospital? Missionary work in a war torn country? Cage free pig farming? Arms dealing? Protecting battered wives? Anyway I am sure a goal to strive for would keep this couple together better than a marriage organised by one partner in 3 hours.

2nd read but again really great love story!

Ah romance, the cop way, lol! A very well thought out and written story with great build-up, drama, angst and just enough sex to be called erotica. I applaud and appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Loved it. Tough guy in love but doexn't know it.

So,what happened next?.Where did they go and what jobs did they get?.Was the car driver charged.?

Army= Drill Sergeant

Marines=Drill Instructor

Same job, same paycheck.

It is not my cup of tea. Your “hero” was a self serving “A-Hole”. With his attitude about LA citizens and many of his co-workers he should have been a hermit living with a goat. Only poor story of yours I have read. 2* at best.

One would have to be a real idiot not to appreciate this brilliant romantic comedy.

As previously stated - "well thought out and written story with great build-up, drama, angst and just enough sex ..."

Excellent story, a little action and lots of love.

5 stars

I enjoyed the story. Wish there was a part 2 showing their lives after the settled in Washington

5 stars

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