All Comments on 'Dark Desires'

Luv this story.

Please keep writing.

Hell yes

awesome story, id like to read a second part

YOU TEASE. Why didn’t you write out the part where they fucked??? I hate you and love you at the same time

Always happy to see a new one from you pop up.

So hot.

HOPEFULLY TO COME OF THIS BEAUTIFUL START, OF A VERY HOT STORY...WAITING FOR MOTHER TO RETURN HOME, AND MAYBE SAMMY CHANGES HIS MIND ABOUT BECOMING LIKE HIS STEP-MOTHER...! BETTY jo xoxo

Really hoping you turn this one into a series!

Make it a series plz

where we learn more about Jin and if his stepmom being right about his friends being women like her.

As with others I was surprised that there was no graphic description of what happened when she took him to bed and what occurred on the following days particularly with your reference to “animalistic lessons” having to wait until tomorrow. Very cruel but on the other hand sometimes it’s nice to be surprised. You could leave it as a stand alone or write a sequel which I’ve no doubt would be enjoyable but I don’t see it as a series. Always leave the customer wanting more. Which you do.

I remember Jin from part 4 of that series when she painted Jaimie’s nails in that classic red. If it is in that same universe, I’d there any chance those two saw Jaimie and Kelly? Hopefully they meet up at some point.

Hi everyone! I just wanted to thank you all for your comments, I don't always just because I know people don't get notified when I do, but I do respond to every email I get through lit (that isn't anon anyway...). But I'm commenting here just to answer the question on story connections, yes, this is the same Jin from Rite of Passage 4! And while at the moment characters are merely appearing in cameo's, there is definitely the chance that sometime in future there might be a crossover of some such! Xx

Your stories are my favourite, the situations are exactly the same as the ones that I fantasise about!

The similarities in your taste and mine are... Amazing really.

I wish I could co-write a story with you but in the meantime, please write another!

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Was great but hen you just glossed over the stuff after the oral. Where's the meaty good stuff for their time in bed?

I would like to see more but I look forward to seeing more spice to it

I hope there's some sort of incest involved in the next chapter if you ever decided to write one.

Another incredibly well-written tale, I could almost feel Sam's sensations as Cassie "taught" him the pleasures of her body and especially her huge cock. Thanks, I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Great story