All Comments on 'Dark Fantasy'

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traci_eliottraci_eliotover 13 years ago
Delicious!

I really enjoyed reading this naughty and very sexy story! Thank you for sharing it with us - 5 *s!

traci

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Second Person Present Tense is a Very Tough Writing Style!

Stick to Third Person Omnipotent Past Tense until you get sense for writing.

Anonymous
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