All Comments on 'Dark Forces'

Amazing Science Fiction . It is terrific how you came up with a present day tale about what is out there in the desert or far underground ? Thanks for a great read .

I thought this would be multiple chapters ... but you cleverly rounded up the story quite well .I will be looking for more of your work with great anticipation .

Great read, thanks for posting!

Very well done story with some unexpected flaws such as "frightened store" when it was obvious "clerk" should have been added. Spellers and normal electronic checkers do make mistakes and with something as highly crafted as your writing you should carefully reread each section or volunteer another set of human eyes to do so.

The story is a brand new superhighway and every error is like an unexpected pothole.

Keep it going but take your time!

I keep an eye on stories and claims of the (purportedly-) "supernatural", so I am familiar with "RUSSIAN SCIENTISTS DIG WORLD'S DEEPEST HOLE AND HEAR VOICES OF THE DAMNED!" nonsense. Great idea to have dovetailed a Horror story onto it!

-Rei