All Comments on 'Dark Impulses'

Are you going to continue with this storyline and make his fantasy a reality?

Very hot!! I was lucky enough to have a mother/daughter for a couple of years back in the early 70's. It was every bit as exciting as your story. Although in my case the daughter was a sexual dynamo too!

Very well written, great story. Please continue it, the story has great potential, either with the daughter or with the older ladies from town. And don't forget, she'll probably want some time with two guys.

You know you can't leave it there. There must be another chapter, and the fantasy needs to become a reality. I wouldn't even be averse to having a few more chapters to build up the inferno, perhaps with some of her friends, until the fantasy is finally realized. Good story, well written, good character development, with the hot sex interwoven just right. Next chapter please.

That was hot. Reminded me of many events of my life that match this story. An exgf's mom whom wanted to fuck me to my 3rd date where an older woman rid my cock to a screaming orgasm to my long list of slutty moms. Moms rule!

Yes. I think a Mother/Daughter threesome would make a nice sequel. But I think this assumption that Rachel is too sexually repressed for something that wild is wrong. It was Rachel's idea to have her husband fuck her mother. She's the one in control. Play that up. Have Dan confess having sex with his mother-in-law on a Thursday. Have Rachel be angry, but having her husband receive a spanking as punishment. This excites them both. And Dan confesses that he has enjoyed spanking his mother-in-law and treating her like a slut. This excites Rachel. She "forces" Dan to tell her about her mother's other fantasies. And Dan tells her about the fantasy threesome. Rachel's plan is to make it happen, but in reverse. She will sneak into her mother's home and "catch" her giving her husband a blow job, just like her mother had seen them do years before. Dan is in on the plan, but doesn't know the surprise. And that is Rachel donning full Domme Gear, including a flogger and strap-on, and dominating both her husband and mother! That is MY fantasy for chapter 2. Obviously, there are lots if directions chapter 2 could take.

Sneaking in a vulgar racist story into incest, please leave.

a second chapter is needed

The only complaint I have with this story is that you talk about her like she's a senior citizen, and then you say she's 48... really? Whole thing would have been more believable if you had said she was 58.

Do you know how to write a story or only know how to write conversations?

when he found out his wifes adulteries, he fixed it so his wife would be forced to be with him permanently

Where he is spending more time with Sylvia than with Rachel, and then he finds out Rachel is a lesbian and is more into women than she is men.

Thanks for the good read

As with many other commenters, I do hope you have more. The fantasy coming true would be really hot! IMO, good read so far!

Can see this expanding to a second chapter where Dan gets his wish of having Sylvia and Rachel together as his sluts. Ending with Sylvia moving in and living with Dan and Rachel and sharing their bed every evening. Of course, Rachel's libido also gets a shot in the arm so that she becomes an every night, every day, any where, any time slut for Dan - as does Sylvia. Life is good!

Good start.

...Man the world would be a lot better place if all women were as open minded as his wife! Nice job---do wish he was incredibility endowed as opposed to average sized.

very good job, love the story hope you continue....

Sex with your mother-in-law is not incest.

I, like all the other commentators, really really wish you to continue your story.

I won't suggest how to do it, I'll just suggest you to not ruin it by rushing it. If daughter is to join them, she has to have a biiiiig dilemma over commiting incest. You could easily spend a few chapters before mother and daughter do something to each other directly. I've never read a Literotica story where couple is inches away of committing incest and then changes mind in last minute, because taboo is too great. I think it would just add to realism...

Anyway, great story so far.

The build up to the next level is flowing very well. I can't wait for the next installment.

have you continued this story would like to read more

have you decided to continue this story?

(1/22/2022) Seven-year-old single submission. WTF! This guy had major talent. What a waste. This story would have been a great first chapter for a great erotic fantasy series. Oh well...

This story isn't just hot, it's dam hot! Everything was going along well but when the idea of having sex with both mother and daughter at the same time, just kind of pushed it into anther dimension. Would loved to have fucked my mother-in-law, but the best I could do was take a pair of her panties to masturbate with. And no, my wife didn't know I had them but not sure if she would have cared too much. Anyway, I agree with other commenters, it's too bad there isn't another chapter where Sylvia seduces Rachel into a threesome.