All Comments on 'Dark Jeans, Dark Eyes Ch. 01'

Well-written opening chapter. Truth kind of writes itself, but not always this well.

Five.

I posted this so many days ago I was pretty sure it was never going to go live on the site. Chapters two and three were posted at the same time, so I'm impatient for the *really good parts* to get out there.

Well im dominican and i didnt expect a long haired cowboy character...

Wonderful series. Hope you keep writing !