by strangerobo
Good work! looking forward to the next installment.
Loved the story but a little disappointed that it is the only chapter please write more for this one
I want a another part
Enjoyed the story - definately need another chapter or two.
A great start! Don't give up. What happened? 1 or 2 more chapters are needed.
don't stop there
I'm angry. How dare you stop
Great story! I really wish you would consider adding another chapter or two.