All Comments on 'Dark Prince'

by LevanaHyll

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Well done!!!

really intresting and intriguing story waiting eagerly for more ...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Can't wait for the next installment!

ForonceForonceabout 12 years ago
I like your work

Usually I´m not into gay, but I do enjoy all of your writings. I like the way you make your characters come alive; feelings and personalities as well as physical appearance. Thank you for posting.

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Due to demand:

I'll be uploading the rest of Dark Prince since there's no way to delete it from here.

canndcanndalmost 12 years ago

Loved this start to Dark Prince. I have been confused about why Remian was one of the angels that came to Alpha 7. I know he is one of the dragons that each took one of the twins when their mom went after Dava. Was he with him to protect him? I love the character you created in Devon. There is this childlike goodness and innocence about him and yet it works even though he's a grown man and in other ways is definitely all man (and no, I don't just mean his body :) The other beautiful thing is the sense of familly that he had with the other MG's and how you can see the hole that is there without them. In some way it is a good foil to Angel who hasn't known love and family. I think there is a need for the same thing in both of them now. You continue to create this world that is so full of detail and imagination. There is so much to your stories. I've read FA twice already and would probably get more insights if I read it again. Thanks for continuing to share this story with everyone here.

LevanaHyllLevanaHyllalmost 12 years agoAuthor
Amazing comment by cnnd

Thanks so much for you comments about Fallen Angel and Dark Prince. Just to clear up a little confusion, Zak and Remi are not the original dragons from Fallen Angel, who had similar names- Zakreel and Remuel. They are their sons, but Rem and Zak don't know this. Remember how Rem said his mother was a pleasure worker? As for Zak, his mother's husband was sterile so they purchased cryogenically preserved sperm and Zakresulted from that. His dadsold his seed for money to escape from Earth because all of Dava's followers were being hunted. Darken had the misfortune of being captured, bit we'llsee more of these characters soon in The Witch and the Dragon. Some jaw dropping episodes are going to start in a chapter or so ;)

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