All Comments on 'Dark Travelers Ch. 04'

OMG When will you put in the sex scenes, I am getting all antsy here. I love everything about this story, and build up is awesome, but when will you the add the getting all to friendly parts.

I love the fact that you aren't rushing anything. It would be so easy to rush now that they are on the path, yet you seem to let everything happen in a realistic time line. You have obviously put alot of thought into this story and it shows. As always I impatiently await the next chapter.

I didn't get a chance to read chapters 3 and 4 until just now.

You're doing a really great job. All the characters are very realistic in their actions. Especially the brothers. I used to treat my brother like that too. bwaahhahahaaa! I loved when Kael poured water on Andi.

The sexual tension between them is getting heavier and heavier, the build up is awesome.

Post the next chapter soon ok?

This story is keeping me on the edge of my seat, can't wait for the next chapter!!!

I can't wait to see how this story turns out. Please keep up the good work.

I'm really enjoying the interactions between the girls and the guys and I am entertained by the siblings and how they are with each other. I can see myself and my sis in the girls. It's fun. The story is great and I hope we get more soon.

feel like nothing much happened in this chapter. They fought some more, almost died again, were attracted to each other and denied it again and made slight progress towards the wizard again. Will Anya lose her temper finally? Will one of the brothers make a move? I love the relationship between the siblings and the pairs but this could go on indefinitely. Something has to give for the story to progress.

I'm in love! You are doing so awesome. More Please.

can i beg for another chapter? lol. i just read all 4 of your stories in an hour. i was so captivated that i forgot its 5am and ive yet to sleep. it will be a long day but well worth it after reading these. can't wait to find out why the mission is so important and to get to the hot and steamy parts. lol. thanks so much for sharing your talent

I am absolutly in love with the story nd can't wait for more. I'm drooling in anticipation to see what happens next with them the characters are so life like in how they act. the brothers definatly act like brothers always picking at each other even though the older seems to have the upper hand but I am curious as to who is going to make the first move Anya or Kirik

Eek! Almost a month since the last chapter - we're dying out here! More soon please, you're doing great so far!

Please post more and soon! We are dying. I love how you are working up to everything and not just rushing through and straight to sex. Don't rush anything! It's great! Publish it as a book when your done? HURRY! We are still dying.

What the hell happened Gina, writers block. If you are reading this when will post another chapter.

Im absolutely in love with this story. By far its one of the best in nonhuman Ive read. Can't wait for more the buildup is amazing your definitely a talented writer. More More More. Im so excited for the next installment. Can't wait to see if the girls fall into further love with them. The love hate relationships are so fun. lol. Wonder who's gonna fight it more the older brother or younger brother. :D.

Keep it coming !!

Youve caught my attention. I can't wait to read more. Keep up the good work.

This story is awesome!! It has to be my favorite that I've read on this site. I just love the setting, and I love the characters. Please update soon. I've checked everyday for over a month! Pleeeeaaaaassse :)

PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORY SOON!!!

I loved your story it was captivating...cant wait to see where the adventures lead them.

please write some more soon please cant wait to see what will happen and who will give in first please continue ASAP

Don't leave us all hanging! It is such a promising storyline but it's maddening to have to wait months for the next part.

What is taking SO long!!! i keep checking to see if you've put anything new up it's taking forever.

Please make another submission soon. We miss Dark Travelers.

Don't worry, I haven't died. I've submitted chapter 5 and am just waiting on approval. :>

I've explained my absence in the coming chapter.

Thank you for reading and enjoying,

Ginnnnnnnnnnnnnnnna!

feel in love with this story....

too slow for me