All Comments on 'Dark Travelers Ch. 05'

I am so glad that you finally decided to join us again. And I really like the situation between Kael and Andi.

Dude.Awesomeness.

And I,for one, *love* the fact that you're drawing it out with the sexual tension. Excellent story. ;)

Gina, My best wishes to you and your daughter. That is not what I expected when I opened chapter 5, I mean sorry it's been awhile but I just had a girl, my first. I best excuse ever!

It's nice that you devoted this chapter to Andi and Keal. They were hit and miss in the previous ones. Having everything play out the way it did was great. Andi finally find some inner strength and faces Keal. And Keal is headed down a very slippery slope with Andi. I can't wait to see how these two progress as the story goes on. What is up w/Kirk? Just when I'm starting to think there might be some sort of hope for him, he becomes an ass hole. I really like this series for a number of reasons and it looks like I'll be adding one more. You are going to drive me crazy with these 2 guys. Hot/cold, nice/mean, I think your going to play it for all it's worth. Good, I like characters that aren't cookie cutter.

And again, congratulations on the birth of your first not only daughter, but child.

I rarely comment but I am unable to control my emotions regarding this story and it would be an insult to the author not to mention how STUNNING this story truly is. Continously I have checked to see if a new chapter has gone up and have remained dissapointed but all that wait has been worth it reading your stories, it seems almost unbelievable that this is your first story in erotica as you write like a professional with many years of experience. My only criticism is that the males seem too strong and impenetrable and women too weak and helpless I wish the men had some sort of weakness to even it up abit.Apart from that minor detail I would like to say thankyou and keep up the amazing work and on a sidenote please dont leave us waiting too long!

I hope you enjoy every moment with your new baby, Gina. Congrats to you and her daddy. I don't have any kids but I've enjoyed the first 2 years with my nephew so much. They really do change so quickly so take pictures every day and enjoy! We'll all keep checking for new chapters when you get to it. Don't miss a moment on our account :)

On the story, I have to say ditto to all that Miz T said. I agree about how much I enjoyed the interactions btwn Kael and Andi, though I am super frustrated but understand you have to be true to this different race, when it comes to him wanting to keep her as a slave. I mean, Anya should challenge them and ask if they are so tough why they would be afraid to let the girls go? What could they or some pathetic humans do to the guys even if they told. Bet they'd react like any man to that challenge to their toughness :)

I'd have loved to see translations in parenthesis next to their language. It adds to the story to see what they say and it is a pain to go to the end for translations as we go. You spent so much time coming up with that, I'm sure, that it'd be great to let us enjoy it fully.

I agree the guys are frustrating as they change from mean to nice and hot and cold but again, I know they can't become men in shining armor as it'd be a lie.

I look forward to more of the story. And again, congrats. What is your little girl's name? If you're cool with saying it :)

Gina, congratulations for your daughter. I'm not a mother myself, but I have a lot of fun with my 11 years younger sister -- who makes me think I'm old. lol

I'm not into making comments about the stories I read, but I just couldn't control myself. I'm absolutely in love with Dark Travelers. And Kael -- I just adore the silent, tall, angry type... Especially those with a boyish charm. :D

I have already added it to my favorites. Waiting for updates.

Congratulations on the arrival of your baby girl. I have 2 kids and can honestly say...good bye to sleep for awhile (LOL)! Been there, but it's all good. Don't know if this is your first child, but you'll love every minute as she grows. Anyway...your story...thanks for the new chapter. I really love it and find myself being drawn into it. I love your character development and for a good story, I have patience. The anticipation of seeing what happens next as each of the main characters' perceptions of one another changes and evolves is worth the wait. I hope we hear from you with the next chapter when you can get to it. Baby first...story later...well...maybe when you're up at 2:00 am. Love your story!

Love love love it!! The slow buildup is perfect!

And yes ma'am, you have a good excuse for making us wait for this :) Congratulations!

Gina, this is any amazing story. You have managed to write a very different, incredibly engaging story; and I want to thank you for that. I am thrilled that you are continuing with the story and hope that someday you do turn it into a novel, I will be a customer. Enjoy your time with your baby girl, it's precious. But please don't stop writing.

I have work to do. I have pictures and videos to edit. Even other stories to read. But I can't stop reading this.

And now it seems I've come to the end of what's available. Please, find a babysitter. Get a surrogate for your husband. And finish the story so I can get on with my life.

Thank you.

WITH the story. It's annoying to have to wait until the end to find out what everything means. I always have a general idea, but it wouldn't be so hard to just tell us, would it?

The chapter itself is okay. I'm still waiting for the girls to show some good old fashioned human temper. They're fairly passive still. Especially Anya. Liked the exploration Andi did and she was understandable frightened after. Looking forward to more, hopefully soon!

Just saw you just had a baby, so not posting soon is completely fine! Looking forward to the next chapter whenever you get it to us. Enjoy your time with your baby girl!

I understand I want to say comgretz on the baby and cant wait to read more of ur story but take sumtime and giv attention to that baby of urs luv lotz kamkam

congratulation on your new baby, now I know that this story will take even longer to finish=(..I hope you still find time to continue with it.

Wow. A new mother AND you are suggesting you'll be able to finish this? That's a heavy load... and your readers who appreciate that may still be chomping at the bit, but won't throw hate at you. ;) That being said, keep using this venue as an exploration of yourself as a writer. We, as readers, can only benefit. I adore what you've done so far, and find the pacing believable. I also find you write the young adult characters very well. Petulance, mind-stupid bravery/curiosity, the belief that one can't be hurt "for real," ring very loudly from both Andi and Kael. I don't mind the translations at the end b/c it gives me a taste of what it feels like for the women to "know" the males are talking about them, but have no idea what they are saying - and it does this without disrupting the pacing of the narrative. But that's just my personal taste. You are doing well not to use fake plot devices to hurry the narrative, although, I would suggest having something other than relationship and character development happen in the next chapter will help deepen the experience. It just has to be real to your world. Enough. I began the comment as encouragement only, and here I'm adding unasked for comments. Enjoy your family, get some sleep as you are able, and write... if only to keep a part of yourself for you.

I hope you are enjoying your new bundle of joy, but please don't keep us hanging. I love, love, love this story.

Thanks for putting this up I can't wait for the next chapters!!

great story!! I like that you have realistic sister characters - so often when authors write sisters, at least one, will act ridiculously stupid, jealous, or immature. Yours react as you would imagine anyone their age would. Somehow you've even gotten me interested in your male characters - they're awful w/o being so over the top that I can't wait to see what happens next.

Absolutely loving this story, you have a real gift in developing both story line and characters. Many, many congradulations on your new addition (always a challenging experience with the first.!) but please, please continue writing you have a real talent!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

loving this :) very very good work! please keep going!

congrats on your little one! please update asap (as soon as you start having time to even sleep again) I can't wait for more of this story!

Congratulations Gina on the birth of your daughter. I am a mom of two myself, so I can understand you have your hands full.

Saying that, I can hardly stand the wait. I have been following your story from its beginning. I am so very curious to see where you are taking these characters.

Much love and appreciation, and keep up the great work.

Your Fan

I know it is late but the translations would have had more meaning if they had been inserted at the time they were said. Otherwise, you have an amazing storyline and a great presentation. I have given you a 5 for all the previous chapters.

Chris Crocker

It would help if the translations were within the body of writing. Perhaps bracketed? Interesting story nonetheless.

This is such an "edge of your seat" page turner!! I love the emotional/sexual tension. Very well written as well.