All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 14'

Followed this from fiction press, the detail is getting better. I actually wasn't sure about this when I first started but it's getting very very interesting. I could almost imagine myself up the pass

Another great chapter to add to all your other ones. Cannot wait to find out how Rael reacts when he hears about Silmaria's Stirring. ;) Please hurry with chapter 15. :)

Another interesting chapter!! Wish they were longer though. Can't wait for the next offering.