All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 16'

That was completely unexpected! That he would recover so quickly, but Im curious what it means too. I'm glad you fleshed outSilmaria caring for him, rather than rush it through, it was really well done.

Sarah

This was a great chapter. One of the best in this series. I loved the detail you put into Silmaria taking care of Rael. And Rael's mysterious healing factor adds some insight into why the arrow is the way it is. Great to see Silmaria finally getting laid too XD

That was different.

Excellent, but different -- I've got no idea what that mercurial flame was *cough*DARKFYRE*cough*, but I'm sure we'll find out.

Wanna know bout tht fire