All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 20'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Love the story dude! And as always you leave us hanging with a cliffhanger like that one. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
This story is......

Like the baby Jesus' tears falling on paper, HEAVENLY! I love it!

Noble_TruthNoble_Truthalmost 10 years ago
World Building

I really liked this one. It had great world building.

NT

gumdropzgumdropzover 9 years ago
...Had a feeling that was gonna happen.

If things go too well, there's bound to be something bad that's happening soon and there it went! Awesome chapter!

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