All Comments on 'DarkFyre Ch. 21'

Two pages of sex regurgitated from previous chapters and the story does not advance at all. What's going on ?

Love your work - take all the time you need if this is the result

Welcome back from your short vacay. We all understand how life can get swept up in all sorts of maelstroms, so dont feel the need to always apologise to us.

I love this story and any wait is really worth it. Please take all the time you need to finish the next chapter or the rest of the story. I'll still be here eagerly awaiting your words.

5 Stars

Nicci

Waited so long for this. Glad you're back, with another great chapter. Poor Rael, he's always getting injured in some way. Cannot wait to see how their are going to get out of this one. Please hurry with chapter 22. :)

Stop killing him dammit! You keep leaving me in tears ;_; This is too much for me man, but I can't stop reading...You're going to make me short circuit my computer in tears. Seriously.

Good gods I love your writing. Never stop. Never ever ever.

-Sheridan

But at least it was worth the wait.

What a lovely description of subspace.