All Comments on 'DarkFyre'

Your setting and atmosphere for the story are well set-up and I enjoy your writing style. I look forward to watching this story progress. 5/5

Love the beginning,cant wait for more chapters,keep up the good work

Hope there won't be too mutch erotica in the story, becouse that migth ruin this great setup you got here.

Anyways great job on the intro.

Please pay no mind to the last comment... the way you have developed such a thoroughly detailed scan of the battle and the men at war, I can hardly wait to read onto the next chapters. I am eagered to see just how you turn all this blood spill and masculinity into something erotica and sensual. Great job, great creativity, and great detail to character. I felt as if I were watching the begins of an awesome movie. Please continue! Kisses

JC

Good story but never completed !