All Comments on 'Darkness'

Oh! My! God! This is one of the best stories I have read on here so far. It is so fucking hot! I loved the sensuality of it all. It felt that they were making love, not just having sex. Well done!

Fantasies written out!!!

By reading your story I am amazed at how well I can follow every movement your characters make. This clearly a strong point in your writing. My problem with this story is that since its only one long sex scene I got bored with it somewhere in the middle. I read until the end and I am happy they enjoyed themselves but I dont care much about it.

Wow, I love your writing... so descriptive I could feel it! Sensual, hot pleasure at its finest!