All Comments on 'Darkness in Seattle Pt. 03'

Rouge is a cosmetic.

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Rogue

Rouge is a cosmetic.

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Or the French word for red.

LOL! I got those same comments when I first started writing. ☺️☺️. Keep up the

Good work. I love your story and can't wait yo read more.

The build up is great, I cannot wait for Anton and Carla to meet.

Most hospital now a days don't just let you go into the maternity ward with out checking in first or having some come get you cause of Crazy people.

I know rouges/rogues has already been commented on, but the ASL glitches in these first three chapters is, I believe, going to prevent me from reading more.

And, by the way, "to" and "too" are not interchangeable!

It's a good story line so far and yes I see the holes nurse ya know but it's good I'm just glad to see it nwa and hopefully you will finish I'm tired of reading multiple chapters and realizing I won't read the end since the writer stops

Story line developing nicely

Chapters need to be longer and more detailed

Eg you could have developed the Grayson pack mystery further

I DEMAND PART 4!! please?

Get an editor please because you have problems with:

Spelling

The name of the main character. Is it Carla or Clara?

Past/present/future tense

Rouge is make-up for your cheeks. Rogue is the word you should be using

great start, please keep going

Wow great story, too bad you're choosing to abandon it. I would have loved to see where it was going.

Please continue the story! I love the storyline and can't wait to see what happens next!

Would love to read more...please update...

Can’t wait to read more!!