All Comments on 'Darla Ch. 03'

In the last part the first week had ended, in the start of this part you are back to the first day. If you have to jump the timeline then you need to warn us, not just change. It was readable till then. Just lost me now.

But the story is good.

I know this is your story, and I love your writing. He mentions previously that he will marry her off. Don't do that please. Have him marry her and she can have his babies while she stays his baby forever. The age play is hot. I would like to see more of it and for it to develop into an integral part of the relationship. He bathes her, dresses her and everything every day. I want her to have his babies.

We think it's time for a follow-up, one step at a time?

Another great story with no Closure..