All Comments on 'Date Night'

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FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

So, Rob is the only one getting his ass fucked by everyone? If the ladies are into all this why aren't their guys taking their turn on the table?

The initial premise is unique. It lost something by becoming a free for all instead of an opportunity for two to experience the 'get the sex out of the way.' The end seems unbalanced with Rob just used by all, not everyone having fun together. IMO.

tonguelasher01tonguelasher01over 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for your input. The way I saw it, Rob got very turned on to being penetrated, and the two of them kept it as one part of their sex when they eventually got married. The other women gradually got relationships of their own, but the men were not from the program. Hence Rob was the one who loved getting fucked, and everyone else (as it happened) was quite happy to fuck him. He remained attracted to women, he just liked getting fucked.

Sman4444Sman4444over 7 years ago
Role Reversal

I guess turn about is fair play. Now we have a better understanding of how the other half may feel.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Wasn't too bad until the last chapter. Ridiculous of course but not too awful. Then you had to make it even more preposterous.

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As far as my stories go, I'm mainly into the kinky stuff. I like stories about very horny people eager to do very horny stuff. Don't read me looking for long romantic interludes. I do have a bad habit of writing to please myself. I realize that this doesn't make me a real ...