All Comments on 'Date with Destiny-Demon Style Ch. 02'

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SweetGaspsSweetGaspsabout 12 years ago
More!

I loved it. ^_^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Waiting for more!!

As the title says =)

sirraliasirraliaabout 12 years ago

Love it. More please.

Lo_PanLo_Panabout 12 years ago
Not bad......

It's not bad, but it seems to be lacking something........

jazz1190jazz1190about 12 years ago

LOVE IT!!! MORE MORE MORE PLEASE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
I agree with previous anom..

I think what's lacking ,is longer chapters,to get to the story.

It took one chapter to get her in the bedroom,

I hope it dosent take another one, for her to just get out of it.

Can't wait for the next crumb,..seriously I love this story!

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 12 years ago
I like the premise of it

and I like her spirit. So far I like him as well. I wonder if there others will have as much personality? I think the pace of the chapters is okay, as long as you update regularly.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Off to a good start

I'm hooked. Would love longer chapters that allow for more character development.

sammee_annsammee_annabout 12 years ago
Loved it!!!

Keep going I can't wait for more :)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Omg i love it!! Plz write more soon!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

LOVE IT!!! Can't wait to read more :)

SinSxPerfectionSinSxPerfectionabout 12 years ago
love it

Please continue. Great plot. I feel like its a breath of fresh air compared to the usual demon/human stories. Can't wait for the next chapter

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago

chapter 3 posted today and somehow here I am playing catch up.....

Corpse_riderCorpse_riderabout 12 years ago
Rich in imagination

A strong story set in a rich and imaginitive fantasy world with vivid charachters made this an enjoyable read.

Addicted2WritingAddicted2Writingover 10 years ago
I like her!

Great story. I'm finding Darien's 'niceness' a bit discomforting, waiting for the 'true demon' to come out.

Well done in the writing and character development!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
OOOhhh lala.

Sexy demons... hmmmm..... I so like your story. On to the next chapter!!! :D

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