by RainierWriterII
Now just your average porn story so to speak. Thoughtfully written and addressing a topic such as this brings into light the love that can happen. Nicely done. It is reallly erotic and definately a turn-on. mmm. Nice thoughts and I would say, not cumming isn't an option. :)
As with all good stories, it left me wanting more.
It was so hot that he finally found a woman that he could fully love.
Even though it is his daughter, he could allow himself to become totally overwhelmed with her femininity.
He's crazy if he lets her go back home.
Thanks for the good fantasy
That was so damn hot I'm ready to get laid . Anyone got a long tongue and a stiff dick ?
I really enjoyed it so much that I would like to see you do more with it. I always enjoy your stories and this one was exceptional. Thank you for sharing it with us.
'cause I vote a big YES
I always love your stories and this one only adds to the list. I would love to see this go farther and farther. Love the ice blue eyes and blonde hair, reminds me of someone.
YOU HAVE AN AMAZING WAY TO GET US ALL EXCITED WHEN WE READ YOUR STORIES. AND I AGREE, THIS ONE SHOULD HAVE AT LEAST ONE SEQUEL. PLEASE...................
Nice story. Great sentence structure, grammar, pacing, and the erotic parts weren't over-done. The story seemed to flow naturally, and that's not an easy task when writing from a first-person perspective. I would definately like to see a whole story arc from this, as I think it would add more depth to it, and draw out the charactors a bit more.
As a whole, well done.
There should definitely be at least one sequel. Maybe bring his daughter's friendout to visit and have him bang them both. Throw in a hot lesbian scene or two (between the daughter and her friend -- or daughter and one of the young starlets) and this would be a perfect story.
You are now officially listed as one of my favorite authors. I told myself that once five of an author's stories make it to my favorite list I would then add that author to my list of favorites, as well.
I would love to see a continuation of this story to follow the progression of their relationship. I love the level of tenderness and adoration between Kasey and her dad - Thank you!
Lovely pacing. I rarely read something that feels authentic - but this definitely did. Your grasp of the English language was a nice background for the plot. I would actually really love to read this story from Kasey's perspective. =)
This story is so beautiful. I wish I had sweet daddy love like that. By far my favorite story and writer. Thank you and please keep writing.
I read the few visable comments on this story and became very angry as I had enjoyed the gentleness of the narration very much. So, I read all the comments and realised that what they all truly meant was that it is so good we needed more. I cared about learning of their previous existances apart and how a genuine lack of deep, meaningful, true selfless love had brought them to cross the forbidden boundary of father/daughter incest. It'd not a complaint, it's a true desire for more; not rampant stag rutting; not pain and abuse; not whoring or even sharing themselves with others, it's just about becoming part of the love of these two peoples lives. So please more of theses two, more stories on this subject.
On a lighter note my wife would say more as well please if she knew I had read it just before I went and played daddies and daughters with her straight after reading it! ;-p
and does her name start with a k, a t, or an e?
Very well written! I hope there is more forth coming. The characters seem interested in maintaining this relationship. Perhaps Kasey becomes interested in experiencing first anal after repeated pleasurable stimulations with this trusted partner. She could even suggest it during a non-sexual conversation like she's got something else on her mind. They should definitely maintain the dating rouse, though.
Well done. Pardon me when I say, 'you've pulled it off, again' - okay, I'm now a convert. I've read hundreds of mom/son stories (my preferred genre) but only a few daddy/daughter stories. I love your style and storylines. You're already in my favourite authors list and I'm eagerly reading through your great titles. Keep up the excellent erotic stories. Kind regards from South London.