All Comments on 'Dating the Boss Ch. 01'

Not a bad premise but rather inadequate story? Back to the every woman Is a DD chest and the guys are hung. Seriously? Get a grip. I'm well aware this is a forum for fantasize but DAMN? 2 stars. Hope the next (if) chapter is better.

DragonRider55

This story can be also put on the Interracial Love section.

A reasonable start, felt a little rushed, need to develop your characters, answer the W's of writing, some good references in how to, and writers resources, on this site, develop the romance if you are going to leave your story in this category. At this time the reader has no back ground, to the characters.

NorthPacific

Agree with previous the comment, DD and 10 inches are fantasies of inexperienced adolescents and there use weakens the story. Glad you made the attempt and the story concept is good, but more attention to realistic detail. Give the story some quality time and post it again. Cheers

UGH yet another 'writer' who thinks all boobs are DD's and men have 10 inch cocks, get a reality check, 1* for those unrealistic stats.