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The story you wrote is just offensive on so many levels.....no father would spy on his daughter like that. Seriously your terrible writing prompted this comment. Try saying the n word infront of a black man and see what happens. You actually admitted to having insestuous thoughts about your daughter. Drugs won't help you you need PROFESSIONAL HELP!

reading the other comments 1 some dads would watch his daughter being a BCS 2...i guess the other comment was made by someone who is never around black men or he/she would know they do talk like that to each other.....but god help the white man that trys it.......

btw i am REAL LIFE BCS so i know what im talking about

I can't get over the way people comment here as though every word the read is true. For all we know the author is an eighty-five year old nun.

please don't be discouraged by the negative comments - i'm a black man and absolutely loved this story. i loved the tone of the narrator, the theme of submissiveness, particularly submissiveness to black men, and i REALLY loved the liberal use of the word "nigger". personally, few things turn me on more than fucking a white girl who will use the word "nigger" while talking dirty. i wish more stories incorporated that.

i liked it. Can't wait for part 2!

Just loved it

Well told - Well constructed

Looking forward to chapter 2 and maybe more

Thank you for writing

Julie

i liked it. Can't wait for part 2!

Where is part 2?

I wrote chapter two and submitted it, but it never made it on to the site. Don't know what happened to it. I do know it was very long and very nasty. It had a little of everything. I try to offend every group at least a little. I would have resubmitted, but the Hard Drive it was on died. I am thinking about rewriting it, only nastier. How can people frequent a site that feature erotic FICTION and complain that the shit they just read isn't real? (I really did write it, I'm just too lazy to log in.)

Hi I am a 28 year old black USA armed forces soldier & I loved your story. Probably the best one I have read thus far.

Fuck the idiots who are reading thi and then judging you for writing it. Good stuff!