by MagicFingers
Great story !!!!!!!!!!!!
Love to here more !
Great story! Can't wait to see what happens next :-)
That was a good story hope you do more with it . It was 4 1/2 but I gave it a 5 .....
What planet were these people from? None of the dialogue was by Earth inhabitants!
Want to see what happens next..
Because he failed to do his job.