by heartlandwriter
Very creative plot but you failed to flesh out the story. Hope you can do more in sequels
sounds like you miss football season as much as I do! when the Beats play the Packers they'll have to do it doggie style so the both can watch the game.
BTW...I'm a fan of the team that has beaten the Bears, Packers and Saints....the World Champion Seahawks!
Love it and as a bears fan this year she will be giving up lots of ass.
Looking forward to see what happens when a Patriots fan crashes the party.. I bet there will be videotaping involved as well as many formations involving "Tight Ends".
I'm a die hard Packers fan with a closet full of stuff. That has to be sone realy good pussy to watch "da Bears" every week..I have Sun ticket also..tell her to get her ass down here!!! LOL, great story, loved it.
As a serious real-life story, it wouldn't be worth much.
As the lighthearted, tongue-in-cheek, over-the-top fantasy that I took it to be, I gave it 5 pointy ones.
A daughter-in-law who likes football!
A daughter-in-law who likes him.
A daughter-in-law who wants to show her appreciation in the finest way.
What's not to like, for a football fan?
(Which I'm not, but liked it anyway.)
Well-written, too.
Paul in Oklahoma