All Comments on 'Daughter-in-law: The Beginning'

by james_india

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Write something at least worth reading, don’t write half stories.

There is nothing to actually read in your story, at least write 2-3 pages rather leaving it high and dry.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Continue Please

Interesting.

Continue.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
She should give access

I think she should give access to him

He is alone. He needs her

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