All Comments on 'Daughter of Treason Ch. 03'

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ajm1250ajm1250almost 14 years ago

I really enjoyed this new chapter to an already great going story. Thank you for sharing work word with us.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Smashing.

I just can't wait to see what will come next in this story.

GrumpyGambyGrumpyGambyalmost 14 years ago
Again, great story!

Your writing is wonderful! I really like this story and the world you've created. This is obviously going to be quite the tale! I really am enjoying this.

I thought it was adorable how Kei imagined seducing Shino, and how he would respond.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Awesome

I think it is coming around great! I am really enjoying it.

IcebluesIcebluesalmost 14 years ago
Brilliant !

I have been waiting so long for this and I am not at all disappointed.Thank you for the great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Enjoying the story

Like the way the story is developing, can not wait for the next chapter.

jonnar01jonnar01over 13 years ago
Excellent, Original Story

An interesting, original world with great characters- not to mention magic, swords and romance. Very well conceived and written. Really looking forward to further chapters!

AislingSpinnerAislingSpinnerover 13 years ago
A lot of fun!

This story is so much fun. I can't wait for it to continue. I loved the quite embarrassing predicament Kei got her self into in the bathroom, but damn what a way to go down. Still loving it! Keep it up, each chapter gets better and better.

BitterSweetSoulBitterSweetSoulabout 12 years ago

I am really liking this story and will be sad when I finish chapter 6 :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it

I simply love the story some typos but it's well written

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