All Comments on 'Daughter Pays Debt Off Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Nice start. Keep on writing !!! Could easily read more then two chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great story

Writing and pacing were good, and the action was hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

really good story, would love to hear more,

KevinandNinaKevinandNinaover 7 years ago
Like an episode of a porn sit-com

Fairly amusing and entertaining.

All it needed was some bad music and a laugh track and it could be a sit-com on a porn channel.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

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AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Please continue

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