All Comments on 'Daughter Training Ch. 06'

What a great finale to a great two-part story! I actually really liked the change in perspective for these two chapters. It was interesting to have the wife's opinion while still maintaining the father-daughter relationship as the core of the narrative. Another great addition to the wild tales of Fertile Valley. I really hope you continue with the 'Daughter Training' series.

Now this is the start of a wonderful chapter

This world you have created and the way you flesh it out is amazing. The descriptions never seemed rushed yet you get so much into each chapter. Thank you for your writing!

Thanks for another tour de force. LOVE your writing. Please write more!! :)

This is one hot series. The idea of a housing division like Fertile Valley although fictional should be a reality. It is too bad that all daughters and sons do not enjoy the type of life created in this story.

This series is just arousingly awesome. And that church scene . . . Wow

My only complaint is that I would've liked a chapter or a part where you showed Ava becoming Gerald's three hole slut during the cruise.

Keep writing this ultra hot series please.

I look forward to a story where Gerard starts training Ava's daughter/sister. That would be very erotic.

How great bringing in the next generation into this perfect world. The fun of Caitlyn drinking her husband’s fun from her daughters pregnant cunt or drinking from her lactating tits is really lovely. The prospect of this continuing to the next generation is perfect.