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"You don't have to do it to me, just let me do it to you; I want to."
"Hmm!"
"But I would like it, if you did."
"Hmm?! I don't know."
"Just let me."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 7 years agoI don't see anything wrong with. my Melanie fooling around with her 87 yo father. Maybe he can't fuck her but he could eat her pussy and assholes! My Melanie is almost 61 yo. Talk about consenting adults! I would certainly share my Melanie with her lucky father!!!
Anonymousover 9 years agoTried reading the story .. but as so many said this 'snorting' business put me right off .. don't know where you live but in England the word is rarely if ever used .. only in the context of snorting cocaine ..
Anonymousover 10 years agoLike seriously cut out the snorting, hmmming hm hmmming and the the ... because it messes up the flow. I enjoy daddy and daughter incest but seriously this saddens me. I was planning on reading the rest but now I won't. But please work on this cuz I do like the content.
Anonymousover 10 years agoI teach English for a living, and even I thought it was your second language based in how you wrote this. The story is decent, but the dialogue is incomprehensible and unbelievably shallow, but the worst part is that it's written like you think you have something important to say. You've ruined any possibility of this being a decent story by refusing to write clearly, and by arrogantly refusing to listen to the very respectful and helpful advice of your readers. This and every other story in this series will be getting a 1 star rating from me just to try to keep too many people from having to read it.
