All Comments on 'Daughters and Fathers Ch. 03'

you "snort" too much

Before submitting the next chapter, please go to your word program tools and in the global change, enter snorted. Then in the box "change to", enter "laughed"

You kids are funny, but not laughable. Maybe you are too young to be here.

"Hi-hi-hi," "ha-ha-ha," "ho-ho-ho:" laughing involves repetition. A snort is just a sudden expulsion of breath. To laugh, after the surprised snort, one breaths in and begins to laugh. Or one just snorts, not laughing, just smiling, grinning, smirking as appropriate.

Get of your hobby-horses. You're making fools of yourselves.

Gets a one because I can't give a zero. Snort.

My Name Is Airabella And I Think Your Stories Are Great!!!! :)

They Get Me And My Best Friends/ Roommates Saniyah., Rylann And Bristey Off When We Read Them Out Loud To Each Other!!!! :)

Thanks :)

What a nice compliment, to hear that a man's fantasies are appreciated by girls!

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I hope you all enjoy yourselves the way I Imagine.

The continuous use of the words: Snorting and snickering ruins the story !

"Snorted" this word waa overused in my opinion...otherwise, great erotic story