All Comments on 'Daughters - Eve, Ch. 03'

Well, now you know how FIT got its start. They're busy trying to create a garden of Eden - for women at least - but what paradise doesn't have a serpent in it? Please look for 'Daughters - Cynthia' coming up next!

And PLEASE, rate my story a five, and make me one of your 'favorite authors', won't you? Thank you very much, your feedback, and letters are SO important in motivating authors in continuing a series.

It's the rare story that combines believable, steamy sex with a compelling plot. Where did the last hour go? Thanks for a great read, Lisa.

Imaginative and well-written like all of you work. Thanks so much.

A genuine blast,really excellent,bravo,well done & any other exhaltations you can think of.Well thought out & executed,had to finish this section before commenting.Now onto the rest with eager anticipation

Awesome awesome writer....I LOVE your stories! Keep them coming please!!

Awesome. Got a bit brutal and anal for my taste. But well thought out and well written. Liked the humour.

Fabulous tale ...... G eat story and tragedy ....... It must be the he ultimately horror show for parents and so andrews mindsetting is understandable .... Amazing