All Comments on 'Daughter's Hidden Desires'

Sometimes you just need a little push. A very nice story Dear.

Awesome story that would make every girl drip from start to finish.

This is a truly naughty and nasty incest story. It's a genuine guilty pleasure, with the dad watching and taping his grown daughter and her ...um...."friend". I think that I've said enough, aside for one critique...it needs more punctuation. Even so, I recommend it and give it a 5 for sheer heat.

ok i get the guilty pleasure thing ..i do but when someone else comments saying they are going to strip with their own daughter it gets a little freaky...i loved the story but that guy is a freak

Your honesty is a breath of fresh air in this hypocritical world. well written and able to be identified with. Sadly for me, it's back to dreaming, but yes, I'd love to.

Best story I've read on this site in a very, very long time...

I'm still shaking. Very nice story. *shivers*

No buildup or suspense....just fucks his daughter & her friend who set him up? The scene with the friend is totally out of character; no questions, second thoughts, etc. And she should have been suspicious of his just falling into bed with her; way too easy. He knew their plan, but she didn't know he knew it. Both participants should have reacted differently. The oil massage scene was really first grade-writing; big disappointment coming from such a gifted writer as "samslam".

Also, he should have proceeded much more cautiously even as he IMMEDIATELY agreed with having sex with his daughter and friend at the same time. Not really believable that he fucks his kid in front of her best friend; he was not supposed to be in on "the plan" remember? We are lead to believe that this is the first incestuous thought he has had, yet he jumps her less than 24 hrs later? He should have shown some fake outrage/embarrassment when she walked in on them. He could have played along and been "overcome with passion" for his daughter later.

To view something that works much better, read his "Virgin Sister" story; now that's entertainment!!!

Dixiebullfrog

You could make a living writting erotica.

ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I HAVE READ.REMINDS ME OF MY OWN LUST FOR ANOTHER!

I've never read something that would seem so twisted, yet be so fucking HOTT! i had a hard time keeping my hand of my dick! Damn good visuals

this was awesome i want my best friend to fuck me and my dad. this story made me drip. wish my dad would fuck me like this. keep writing

What a great story. I have wanted to fuck my daughter since she took to wearing those tiny bathing suits. With her tits showing and her ass wiggling as she walked. Fan-Fucking-tastic. Some of these girls know what they do to their fathers and they love it.

WELL D0NE YET AGAiN!!! Y0U NEVER SEEM T0 DiSAP0iNT ME!!!!

You did an excellent job.

Amazing story! Please keep writing!

Very, Very HOTTT

your story is fukin bomb cuming from an 17 yr old cali girl :)

Absolute Erotica, had me Rock Hard. Keep writing, you are a natural wordsmith. I look forward to more from your pen. I so wish my eldest stepdaughter was as sexy and obliging as your characters.

some of theses comments remind me of a lou reed incident. lou reed wrote an amazing song called heroin, and due to fans misunderstanding the message of the song, they would go up to him saying they loved to shoot up to his song, and as a result he stopped performing it. now im not going to pretend i know what the authors purpose or message is, but just in case peoples comments about fucking their own daughter make him hesitant to continue writing, maybe you ought to lay off of comments like that. after all, i know for a fact none of us readers wants samslam to stop writing masterpieces such as these

this is really a nice and hot story....iluv this

masterji (choot ka rasiya)

really loved your story, much better than the usual wham bang thank u mam .. keep it up (no pun intended) it was so gooooood

what a great story. well written. long, but well paced so it was an easy read. great characters and believable. the best!

Going to go to my room and use my vibrator..

I made a mess just reading it. I didn't have to touch myself or anything. Picturing my daughter and her friends when reading...dang!

Ridiculously good. This goes straight to the top of my favourites!

This was so good.. Wow! Fuck! Fuck!

God this made me so wetttt. Wish I could fuck my Daddy like this, especially with my girlfriend. But its so hard to get him alone. Pleaseeee write more, loved reading this while finger fucking my pussy...

Wow I would love to be there to see Chris' face when he saw the video. I often wonder if my daughter has ever wanted to be intimate with me, I sure have had feelings about her. Beware big brother is watching and listening so watch and be careful to what you say and do!!!!!!

Ive read at least 500 of these erotic stories and this is the very first I felt absolutely compelled to respond to. Absolutely freaking AWESOME. PLEASE make a porno of this but dont bother if you cant get the quality of actors and direction. Bravo bravo bravo

I meant to say dont bother making the porno if you dont get the quality of actors, direction that this story DESERVES!

Some parts were pretty unbelievable but hey, this is a fantasy! Keep writing the stories, you're so talented!

Great story! Maybe a little long in the buildup phase but I loved the way you worked into Daddy/Daughter incestual fucking! The only thing that would have made it better would have been having Daughter move back home and having Daddy fuck baby girls into both sweet young pussies!!!

I wonder how many "volunteers" you'd get from Literotica to play Daddy? Or Connie, or Karla?...........

Great story and a superb job of telling it.....

hottest story ive read today!!!!!!

<3 I love this story, i wish you were my daddy

Great story, and well told. So many excitingly hot details!

I first read this story back in '06 before my kids came along and I loved it. Even now, despite the fact that I'd be appalled at the idea of doing this with my girls, this story is hot as hell. To be honest though, I've always wanted to see a sequel from a year or so down the road, possibly something surrounding the marriage of Connie and Don and the mention somewhere of Karla and Connie having children that were born just days apart...

I like what tiljan said.... any possibilities of a part two with don marrying connie and kids from both girls.... what do you say..... I would love to read more of a follow up on this story. I have a little girl and I would not dream of this but the story is a good one and I like Mr d. hooking up with his daughters best friend.....

My story is very owe to this. My niece got accepted to Purdue and when my sister called to see if she might be able to stay with me, I grumbled at first but relented I a trial basis. I hadn't seen her in years and when she showed up I about shit. She was a knockout. 5'9" with long auburn hair, green eyes and tits and ass to die for. I decided to start spying. First just trying to catch peeks, but I decided to get some cameras. These were just pinhole cameras so the picture wasn't great, but I managed to shoot many loads to them. After her freshman year she asked to just continue living here. I couldn't imagine not having this sexy girl around. By the time Christmas rolled around, she confronted me about the camera she found in her room. I thought I was going to jail. She then told me if I wanted to watch her undress I could just ask. It started with nightly strip shows then progressed to us having sex. We have since fucked in every room of the house and in a few places around campus. When she graduates, we plan to actually move out west, buy our own little cabin in the woods and live as husband and wife.

Couldn't be better - unless both females become with child or children. Perhaps anal and other sexual acts. You get five stars for your overall flow of this terrific read.

So fucking hot!!! Five stars!

Such a good story well written never letting my cock go soft, if only this had happened to me in real life I'd be very happy.

you use voyeurism and incest perfectly. very hot, very horny tale; it got me going.

A extremely erotic storyline that flows nicely, with detailed character build up, to make this yummy chronicle quite addictive, that has this reader craving more!

If you can't get laid outside of your Dad's or Daughters you must be pretty homely looking. That, combined with your mental illness makes me wonder if all of you are from the West Virginia mountains. Sick crap.

btw jd pengen nyoba nih playing Dady n her dugther...

so awesome

Your Shallow mind Show's, Lol

Great Story, look forward to reading More😋

This is a great story. I don't give many 5-star ratings, but this earned one.

I stumbled across nude pictures of my adult step-daughter a year ago, and, although nothing has, or ever will, happen with her, I like to read stories about voyeurism of family members and suspend reality for a while. I'd never risk installing cameras or anything like that, and I didn't make copies of her pictures, but some things can't be unseen.

Anyway. Good story/fantasy.

Despite not being into daddy daughter stories, I really liked this incredibly hot and amazingly well-written story. This was really erotic. The story itself kept my interest, it was well-paced, and the dialog was smart and sexy. I didn't find the surveillance all that plausible or sexy (Don was a gentleman, except for his initial reaction to Connie staying with him was to wire her room with cameras?), but it was a *great* plot device. Well done!

Please write about the 3 of them going on a date or a night out in Vegas or dancing together

Very nice, one of the hottest stories I read over here! And I love that you are able to insert some humor, too, which is very rare thing here. The scene of girls playing with sausages had me rolling :D :D :D

This was the 8th samslam story I have read, and like every one of them it is unique, beautifully written, and erotic as hell! A widowed and retired Exec who is a secret voyeur with the Tech know-how and equipment needed to record in his adult daughter's bedroom and bathroom gets to record her best friend's body and voice as she boards with him, and discovers that she and his daughter are passionet lovers, and each want to fuck dear old Dad! And he certainly gives them the chances! Just a wonderful story as it stands, but it would have been nice to have a continuation story, perhaps a couple of years later to cover one loose end: what becomes of Connie's career, and what happens to her scumbag boss and his wife? How about this| Connie and Karla are happy to continue giving dear daddy all the sex he can handle while continuing to enjoy each other fully, Connie gets her promotion, and moves on to an even better job elsewhere (but is still able to live with Daddy don. Chris the scumbag. Following the premature death of Chris's father-in-law tries to take over the company and dump his wife. Daddy don, bless his heart, has kept the tape of Chris fucking Connie, and delivers a copy of it to the wife, and helps her to divorce Chris and take back the company. In gratitude the wife makes Daddy Don the new president of the company, and he rehires Connie to do the actual running of it. But not before the now unattached wife takes Don into Her Own Life and gets him to turn her into a mature sex goddess, before marrying him! and all live happily ever after! Just an idea, samslam, and I'm truly sorry you've stopped your story-writing. But perhaps....there is still that one more story to tell? Thanx for the Great Read!

"Daughter's Hidden Desires:" - Although I am an enormous fan of Taboo/Incest, especially in the usual familial way, I'm referring to love, romance, fidelity, and, if the affair leads to a typical-like family situation I appreciate the female to be impregnated. Of course with those criteria, as in most all romance, life-commitment relationships, the couple is a male and a female.

There are some, though limited, relationships, where a threesome on the surface makes sense. This story theme, not being realty, has some merits for a development of a threesome. The females, daughter Karla and college roomie/friend Connie are not lesbian, have been friends for many years, share a female love for each other, but also have more appeal to the male gender for typical sexual satisfactions. The threesome comes into play when Karla's father is enticed, even engineered into being the male pillar of the threesome. The females--daughter and her best friend--are overly excited, even thrilled that Karla's father, Don is their male lover!

The story has a great theme; the characters all play perfected roles, with awesome dialogue. There is love, lust, romance, respect, caring and dedication of all three characters.

Without being critical nor the word police, I found one obvious misused word...the word should have been scent, but sent was used; I discovered the error when my reading rhythm was interrupted by the wrongly spelled word being used. The writer is a masterful incest writer. He adds some levity to the theme of respectful incest! Accolades!!!

Very hot story, really loved it.

Totally immersing!

I felt that I was a part of the story along with the characters.

Very well done.

Bill S.

Good job; thanks for sharing your work!

this story was amazing. loved it

A really enjoyable well written story.

Good story, well written and not abysmally short as some so-called writers keep doing. Keep going you've got talent. Anony Mous

Bravo! Sam, that was as hot a story as I've read in a long time. Very well written, with believable characters and a great plotline. Thank you, and keep up the good work!

5 stars, and definitely at least 5 good jerk offf sessions for this hot story!!

Oh, and I had to say something about anon's rant from about3 years ago: if youre going to read a story that's decribed as incest/taboo you should expect incest and taboo. Dumb fuck! If that's not your thing dont read it! Better yet, go back to your better homes and gardens magazines and stop pissing all over the well written stories here. Chicken shit "anon"!

A superior tale told in a loving manner. Creating characters like Don, Connie and Karla and making them seem real makes them relatable and enjoyable. I love happy endings and I don't mean the sexual ones. While the sex was great, the relationships were the real story. The author took time to develop the plot and characters to make everything fit perfectly. I loved it. Thanks!

Really good sexy fun, with a happy ending, wasn’t too keen on his professional level, spying on the young girl, when she first comes to stay, and then going back in slow motion and rewind and zooming in to see his daughters pussy in detail, seemed a bit unnecessary, as did his watching after he knew he was in there. Still love the threesome at the end.

Totally agree with the last 5 comments.

Delicious story, dreams coming true !

Thanks.

Belgian Chuck.

Definitely 5+stars! What two beautiful love stores. l loved the threesome at the end. We need more stories like this one, it makes you feel all over warm.

LeB